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PostSubject: Poetry by Me! =D   Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:04 pm

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"I'm so sorry", I tell you
My eyes are brimming with tears
From my voice you can hear it's true
My heart is spilling its fears.

"Everything's my fault", I say
Because everything I feel is wrong
I have to go, I know no other way
And I feel that I don't belong

I say my good-byes and weep
As I turn and look over the edge
And I prepare to take the leap
Soon no longer with life to allege

Soon it will all come to an end
And there will be nothing left to save
Maybe all I needed was a friend
I guess nobody could be that brave

But then I hear your voice
And I don't think I understand
But you've given me a choice
And you're holding out your hand

And you don't say a thing
But your face says it all
You're taking me under your wing
You're not letting me take the fall

In My Mirror

I look in the mirror
And here's what I see
A person I hate
Staring back at me...

It would be easier to be myself...
If I were someone else...

Ashamed of my reflection
Nothing I do is right
It hurts to be who I am
Battling this losing fight...

What else can I be...?
But who I am? Me...

The me that I see is weak
And I know what I see to be true
I know a mirror can't lie
Everyone else sees it too...

I can't look in the mirror, I don't like what I see
I can barely stand... Me...

Is beauty in the eye of the beholder?
Because I don't see beauty at all
Everything I see is ugly
In the mirror on my wall

What's on the inside doesn't matter
If nobody cares to look...

But I guess your eyes are different
Because I know when you look at me
You see past everything I was
To everything that I can be

I can't believe what you want,
Is what you see in me...


Just 2 poems I've written. Tell me what you think.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:37 pm

I love em o__o
Especially "In My Mirror"
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:52 pm

Thank you, Smile. I have some other poems but I'll wait and post those later. I write poetry a lot, mainly tearjerkers.

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"I'm so sorry", I tell you
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My heart is spilling its fears.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:56 pm

I write as much as possible.
Been told by several teachers I have enough talent to be published
And if I keep improving one day be...I forget what it's called, but Robert Frost was the last.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Tue Jan 06, 2009 7:04 pm

Poetry <33 ill post mine later you should make a Poetry section. ill make it if i become admin itll me no prob xPP
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Tue Jan 06, 2009 7:18 pm

My hands work, I can make a section for it later.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:51 am

Oh, I love poetry. I'm a really sensitive guy like that. I like your poems, and a section for writing like poems and short stories would be cool. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:29 pm

I loved the second poem.
I sometimes do not understand myself.
but heck, that's me. @
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:30 pm

nice franci XD i like cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:32 pm

Thanks, I really like writing and I like writing poetry. I write poetry in French and Spanish also. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:33 pm

so post some of those XD tryna hold out on us? >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:35 pm

Personally, I'm studying the Elizabethan diction.
I hope to start writing poetry like such soon.
I think the Elizabethan diction is soooo beautiful. Shaksepeare <33
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:36 pm

my personal style is more making up my own way of doing this stuff. following some anchient guys poetry just isent my thing. im a trail blaizer >=3
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:44 pm

I hate speaking in other languages unless other people can understand, if not, I just feel like I'm being stupid and talking to myself. Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry by Me! =D   Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:53 pm

lols XD its true,speaking in spanish in a redneck trailer park where people can barley speak english is pretty much the same as talking to yourself.
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