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PostSubject: da new guy,and some songs.   da new guy,and some songs. EmptyFri Jan 09, 2009 8:15 pm

hey all,im new and i figured id just put up some poetry. some of you may recognise it,because it was used by warner bro's in the band Rise Against.
i let warner bro's the songs because my mother was going bankrupt and i got a crap load of money for them,so i saved my mom from bankrupsy.
so here i go,im going to put up 3 poems.


~~ The Good Left Undone~~



In fields where nothing grew but weeds,
I found a flower at my feet,
Bending there in my direction,
I wrapped a hand around its stem,
I pulled until the roots gave in,
Finding there what Id been missing,

But I know
So I tell myself, I tell myself its wrong.
Theres a point we pass from which we cant return.
I felt the cold rain of the coming storm.

All because of you,
I havent slept in so long.
When I do I dream of drowning in the ocean,
Longing for the shore where I can lay my head down,
Ill follow your voice,
All you have to do is shout it out.

Inside my hands these petals browned,
Dried up, fallen to the ground
But it was already too late now.
I pushed my fingers through the earth,
Returned this flower to the dirt,
So it could live. I walked away now.

But I know
Not a day goes by that I dont feel this burn.
Theres a point we pass from which we cant return.
I felt the cold rain of the coming storm.

All because of you,
I havent slept in so long,
When I do I dream of drowning in the ocean,
Longing for the shore where I can lay my head down,
Ill follow your voice,
All you have to do is shout it out.

All because of you
All because of you

All because of you,
I havent slept in so long.
When I do I dream of drowning in the ocean,
Longing for the shore where I can lay my head down,
Inside these arms of yours.

All because of you,
I believe in angels.
Not the kind with wings,
No, not the kind with halos,
The kind that bring you home,
When home becomes a strange place.
Ill follow your voice,
All you have to do is shout it out.

~end~

~~Hero Of War~~
He said, Son,
Have you see the world?
Well, what would you say
If I said that you could?
Just carry this gun and youll even get paid.
I said, That sounds pretty good.

Black leather boots
Spit-shined so bright
They cut off my hair but it looked alright
We marched and we sang
We all became friends
As we learned how to fight

A hero of war
Yeah thats what Ill be
And when I come home
Theyll be damn proud of me
Ill carry this flag
To the grave if I must
Because its flag that I love
And a flag that I trust

I kicked in the door
I yelled my commands
The children, they cried
But I got my man
We took him away
A bag over his face
From his family and his friends

They took off his clothes
They pissed in his hands
I told them to stop
But then I joined in
We beat him with guns
And batons not just once
But again and again

A hero of war
Yeah thats what Ill be
And when I come home
Theyll be damn proud of me
Ill carry this flag
To the grave if I must
Because its flag that I love
And a flag that I trust

She walked through bullets and haze
I asked her to stop
I begged her to stay
But she pressed on
So I lifted my gun
And I fired away

The shells jumped through the smoke
And into the sand
That the blood now had soaked
She collapsed with a flag in her hand
A flag white as snow

A hero of war
Is that what the see
Just medals and scars
So damn proud of me
And I brought home that flag
Now it gathers dust
But its a flag that I love
Its the only flag I trust

He said, Son, have you seen the world? Well what would you say, if I said that you could?


~~End~~

~~Entertainment~~

All we are is entertainment
Caught up in our own derangement
Tell us what to say and what to do
All we are are pretty faces
Picture perfect bottled rage
Packaged synthesized versions of you

We've all made petty fortunes but we can't afford a life
Confined to pull-out quotes and hotel rooms
They all scream California and its toppling empire
But can't you see the end is coming soon

Come one come all the new sensation
Guarantees an obligation
Spotlights follow every single move
Basking here on ten foot stages
Pouty lips and oh so jaded
All as if we have something to prove

Despite these petty fortunes we still can't afford a life
Confined to pull-out quotes and hotel rooms
They all scream California and its toppling empire
But can't you see the end is here

And if we cared at all
about this unknown plight
then we'd do something more
to finally make this right

Is this only entertainment
Pull the curtains, places please
We've learned to sing and dance and cry on cue
But this is more than entertainment
In a world so sick with pain
This is the only thing that's real or true

We've all made petty fortunes but we can't afford a life
Confined to pull-out quotes and hotel rooms
They all scream bloody murder over graves already dug
But can't you see the end
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PostSubject: Re: da new guy,and some songs.   da new guy,and some songs. EmptyMon Jan 12, 2009 9:32 pm

wow 9/10 xP
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